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    Đề chưa thấy xuất hiện. Hôm nay ad đi chơi Halloween sao?
     

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    @Belcooo @tontuvinh @dabako @Duong BuiXuan Tuần này tạm hoãn do Admin đang bận hoàn thành một vài việc ^^ Các admin đã thông báo trên các fanpage rồi đóa ^^ Hẹn gặp lại các bạn vào tuần sau nhé ;)
     

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    Nowaday, many people use air conditioner in their house on the summer. This machine makes our house cooler. However, using air conditioner many times will takes a lot of electricity leading to many problems. So what is the cause of this problem ? There are some explanation for this

    The main reason of people for using air conditioner is the weather. Vietnam is a tropical country that means the weather is usually very hot. Especially in the summer, people have to use air conditioner in the afternoon or at night because they can stand with the high degree in their room. By using air conditioner, they will feel more comfortable when they sleep. However, the degree outside their room is so high that make them cannot leave it.

    This problem leading to the next reason. People just want to stay in the air conditioner room because the outside now is hotter than before. And because it takes a long time for air conditioner to cool the room so they will not turn off the air conditioner even they leave the room but let it run as long as they can. This take a lot of electricity and cause many problems.

    One of the problem when using air conditioner is it effects our health. Air conditioner can make you feel comfortable for a moment. But for long, your body will lose water, and you will feel your body is drying. This will make you tired when you wake up tomorrow.

    The other problem when using air conditioner is the balance. When you use air conditioner, the degree outside doesn’t change. You will feel hotter when you go outside. When using air conditioner, if you go to take a shower it will be danger for your life because of the immidiately change in the degree, so you you should be careful when using it.

    The use of air conditioner can become excessivefor many reasons and it will lead to many problem for our life. We should consider more careful when using it so it cannot do more harm than good on you.
     

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    There is an argument about whether students such as in Viet Nam should have good understanding of every aspects, consisting of things aren’t useful for their furure careers. Even though it has some good reasons to know everything, I strongly believe they should concentrate on their aims with relevant things.

    On the one hand, it is clear that if you are knowledgeable of as many subjects as possible, you will apply into your life suitably and effectively. For instance, when you communicate with foreigners, you can tell them about your country’s history and make good impression in their eyes. Futhermore, the balance of understanding in many disciplines help you be outstanding easily in any circumstances such as joining a club, participating a party. Finally, it can boost your confidence in both work environment and society.

    On the other hand, I believe that it is more beneficial for students to focus on their subject which is relevent to career path. Thanks to their major’s knowledge thoroughly, they can get a well-paid job in the future. It is essential to become competitive and ideal candidates in a list of hundred people. In addition, if students study everything in shool or university, they will not have enough time to concentrate on their main subjects they choose in occupation prospect. On top of that, knowing everything is not favourable condition to develop their career. It is extremely difficult to explore what students are interested in truthfully. They have many subjects to deal with.

    In conclusion, it is likely for students to be more succesful in their future career if they are incredibly well-educated in their main goals.
     

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    It is agrued that lviing in a big city brings more benefit. While some individuals say that they see living in a small town can bring more advantages. I would agrue that it would better to build family in a city.

    On the one hand, people like to live in a small town as for two reason. Firstly, a concern of noise polution in a big city, for example: cities like New York, Beijing, Sai Gon are called non-sleeping city because 24/7, the social activities happens allday and in the rush hour, the noise can be more than fifty decibenz which can easily hurt our ear. Secondly, a quality of environment especially air condition. Car, building in a big city emit tons of cacbondioxide into an atmosphere per day, which lead to a result of increasing number of people suffer lung, noise health problem such as cough, lung cancer, snivel,… As a consequences, they see living in a big city brings more harms than benefits.

    On the other hand, i belive that it is more beneficial to live in a city. The first reason is that health service accessibility, a hospital locate in a city often has more advance mechanism to cure problem. For instance, in Vietnam, people from small town or rural areas often get their health treatment at the city hostpital instead of their province’s hospital because they do not just their town’s health services. Furthermore, big city is the first place get access to new technology, which can improve a living standard. For example: the noise problem has been solved by soundproofing glasses or doors.

    In conclusion, although living in a small town can bring many health benefits, however, with the health services and advance technologies, not only health but also living standard in the big city improve.
     

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    It is argued by some people that living in the countryside or in the suburb brings about a number of benefits. However, this is refuted by others who are in favor of settling in a big city. This is a controversial issue, but personally, I think the second view is more reasonable.

    To begin with, people can gain advantages from living in a small town. The population in the countryside is not over-crowded as in the city; therefore, there would be no traffic jams and residents may never get stuck on the street for hours. More importantly, since the atmosphere on the outskirts is hygienic and quiet, not only can people enjoy the sanitation, they can also have a slower pace of life and get rid of stressful problems in daily lives.

    On the other hand, there are plentiful benefits that people can derive from living in the city. It cannot be denied that the infrastructure in the urban has been improved in order to meet the demand of residents in education, economics and cultures. What is worth noting is that there are numerous factories and companies located in the city; therefore, it is easier for employees to find a job. Last but not least, cities are a source of entertainment for people to choose after a hard-working day to unwind. For example, cinemas or amusement parks are wonderful spots for a relaxation and refreshment.

    All things considered, both living in the suburb and in the city have its own merits; however, I strongly believe that it is better to settle in a big city.
     

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    Choosing a place to live is an important decision for many people. While there are some obvious reasons to prefer settling in an urban area, I find myself advocate for the country side because of its peaceful life style.

    To begin with, there is no doubt that the life in a big city has many advantages. Firstly, the living condition there, in some certain aspects, is better compared to a village. Because of the high population density in the urban area, almost all the big brand names will have their facilities in town, so people living there will have more change to use the top quality services. For example, all the top quality schools, hospitals or banks are just some minutes away around the city center. Secondly, there is more job prospect in big cities. Companies can afford to pay a better wage because they can easily sell their products in large volume in the urban area. Living in the metropolis, therefore, are considered to be a good choice for many young people.

    Despite the obvious benefits of living in the big cities, I still personally hold the view that life in the rural area is better. The first reason is because of the quality of life. There are far less air pollution, traffic jam or food hygienic issues compared to a crowded city. Because of that, life in a country side is much happier with many peaceful moments, which are very suitable for a senior citizen. More importantly, it is much cheaper in the village. Because of the local source of food, or the low requirement of the rural community, one can easily find all their basic need in a small village market, and in turn, keeps the salary and goods price in a low level. Because of that, while the young people prefer to pursue their career in town, retired people find themselves comfortable with a rural settings.

    In conclusion, even though there are some advantages living in a big city, I still hold the view that the village atmosphere brings more fulfillment to life. I believe government and society should work together to improve the living standard outside of a metropolis, while easing the urban issues in order to make people living in both areas happy.
     

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  11. Duong BuiXuan

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    It is strange, the week 19 contest post was deleted while I am writing, so I think I should post mine here. Anyway, thanks admin for reviewing my writing.
     

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