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IELTS WRITING CONTEST - WEEK 19

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  1. Hoàng ZIM

    Hoàng ZIM Master Staff Member

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    OVERALL: 5.0

    TR: 5.5

    The structure to your essay is well-constructed

    Your sentences need to be more well-illustrated for a higher band-score

    e.g: For example, rising a horse, spending time chasing your cat

    The ideas given are suitable for the topic, but should be illustrated more clearly

    CC: 5.0

    There are quite a few misused words and phrases

    e.g: watching the aquarium with colorful fish floating can help some patients beat their stress level.

    Some illustrations for your ideas still lack of reasons to support

    Some sentences are confusing so it’s hard for the examiner to make out

    LR: 5.0

    You have an okay range of vocabulary relating to the topic, however it should be used more efficiently. Try not to repeat words and be more diverse with your illustration

    Some unusual words which are wrongly used in this essay

    You need more specific examples to make your essay more convincing

    You need to use more collocation relating to the topic

    GRA: 5.5

    Some grammatical mistakes are found in the essay

    You still have problem with a/an/the

    Some sentences are dark in meaning

    Try to use daily used words, practice simple sentences before jumping to unusual, complex sentences
     

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    Cảm ơn ad :)
    Phan Anh Phú 0982558961
     

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    Dương Thị Hương Trang 018654398182
    thanks ad
     

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    Trang ơi hình như em nhập sai số rồi ấy ^^ em gửi lại số nhé
     

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